We've had the same question come in a few times lately, and it's a good one. It's about voice.

The worry goes something like this. If I study craft, if I join a school and learn the rules, will I still sound like myself? Or will all that technique slowly smooth me out until I read like everyone else?

I want to answer that honestly. But to do it well, I think we have to step back to a question that sounds simpler than it is. What do we even mean by voice?

Voice can feel like a mystery — the thing that makes a page unmistakably yours, even when it's hard to say why. But it's less mysterious than it seems. Look closely, and voice turns out to be made mostly of choices. Yours. And once you can see them, you can begin to work with them.

Here are a few of the big ones.

The first is simply what you choose to write about. The subjects you keep circling back to. The details you can't help but notice. Hand two writers the same prompt and they'll reach for completely different things, and that reaching is already voice.

Then there's the shape of your sentences. Do you write in long, unspooling lines that carry a reader along on a single breath? Or short ones. Blunt ones. The kind that land and stop. Neither is better than the other. But the rhythm you fall into is a kind of fingerprint, and it changes how it feels to be read by you.

There's word choice, too. The register you reach for without thinking about it. Whether you say a woman was tired, or bone-weary, or just done. Each one tells the reader something a little different, not only about her, but about the person telling her story.

And underneath all of it is the feeling you leave in the air. Some writers are warm. Some are wry. Some are tender, some deadpan, some a little sad or quietly furious. That mood is yours as well, and it's often the last thing a reader can name and the first thing they remember about you.

Here's the part that matters for anyone worried about losing their voice. Once you can see it as a set of choices, you can actually do things with it.

You can pull a piece of it out and look at it on its own. You can notice the thing you already do well and lean into it — double down, make it louder on purpose. You can catch the habit that's running away with you and ease it back. None of that erases a voice. It sharpens one. You end up sounding more like yourself, because you're choosing on purpose what used to happen by accident.

And that, at last, is the honest answer to the question that came in.

We don't teach voice, because we can't. Voice is made of your choices, and those belong to you. What we can teach is everything that surrounds the choices — how to see the ones you're making, how to weigh them, how to sharpen the ones you keep until they land the way you meant them to. The craft is always in service of the voice, never the reverse.

So when you learn how to write a mystery with us, you're not being handed a rule to obey. You're being handed a set of tools. Conventions. And we hope you'll break some of them one day, the ones that have it coming, once you know them well enough to break them on purpose and bring the reader along with you.

You can see this in how the first course is built. The very first day tells you there's no single right way into a scene: pick a door, they all lead in. Then we spend five days handing over moves, one after another, until it very nearly looks like a rulebook. And on the last day of that stretch, we say the quiet part plainly. Those were tools, not rules. What you make with them is yours.

Let me show you what that looks like from the inside, using myself, since I'm the easiest person here to embarrass. I'm writing my own mystery alongside the course, from the same prompts everyone else gets. Here's how mine opens. Rough, first swing, no polish:

The road stretched for miles in front of Dan Odell. The hot Charleston sun beat down on the pavement, making him sweat as he ran — well, if he was being honest, it was more of a jog… well, if he was being really honest, it was more of a shuffle.

I hand pages like that to Korina Moss, our founding faculty member and an author considerably more decorated than I am, and I let her mark them up. Watching her do it taught me something about how good feedback actually works. She'll find a spot where a character is doing something because I needed him to, not because he really would, and instead of rewriting it for me, she'll offer a small, almost playful possibility and leave the solving to me. Somewhere else, she'll simply tell me I got it right. She isn't there to replace my choices. She's there to help me see them more clearly.

I won't pretend it always feels good. I want to believe every word I write is gold. The reality is that every word is progress. That's the job. And through every note, the pen stays in my hand.

So here's the whole of it, for anyone who wrote in worried.

We teach craft to make your voice clearer and stronger, not to smooth it away. The choices stay yours. Always. We're only here to help you see them, and to hand you the tools to make them sharper when you decide you want them sharper.

Keep your voice. It's the best thing you've got, and it was yours from the start.

If you want to see what this looks like in practice, it's the heart of my first course — a 30-day write-along where we draft a first chapter together and see if we can shake some story ideas loose. Reply to this one and I'll tell you about it. I'd genuinely enjoy that.

Until then…

— Patrick

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